Monday, March 3

Reporting This Story, Yoda Is

Lab results show claims about natural product from P.E.I. questionable
from CBC | Prince Edward Island News

Claims that a nutritional supplement, advertised as being manufactured on
Prince Edward Island, is made from natural sources are questionable, an
investigation by CBC News has found.
Is this not one of the wonkiest sentences you've ever read? I guess it makes sense, grammatically, but it seems like something Yoda might say with his "misplaced modifier sometimes employ, do I" way of speaking.


1 comment:

Paul H said...

CBC News has investigated a nutritional supplement, advertised as being manufactured on PEI. The claim that it is made from natural sources is questionable.
I think better two sentences is.
What the heck does "questionable" mean? Anything is questionable....they should have the balls to say "dubious" or "false" or perchance "uncertain"?